Pitch Feedback

Feedback Sheet

This is the feedback sheet which our group received after presenting our pitch to our teacher. We were given a Pass+ grade, and the next step would be to try and reach a Merit grade. In order to do this there are a few points which we need to add to our pitch and develop in order to make it easier for Sheffield Live Radio to understand the product we are pitching to them.

1st Improvement:
First of all we need to make the pitch more fluent through the way that we present the facts behind us during the pitch. In order to do this we will be changing the PowerPoint presentation which we used in order to make sure that there are not too many words on each page, and if there are any images then we will try to use less words, and only keywords.

2nd Improvement:
Secondly we need to explain the target audience in more detail, because so far we have only explained the age of the consumer and no other information about who they would be. The product will be aimed at people from Sheffield who are between the ages of 13-30, and are interested in cooking. They will be people who have just stated cooking or want to learn how to cook something new with our adventurous recipes which are used on the podcast.

3rd Improvement:
The last thing we need to do is think about the delivery of the pitch. For this we just need to decide who will speak when, in order to make the pitch more fluent and that all of the members of our group have a role and speak equally during the pitch.